movies

Snow White Live

I finally put up the light-blocking drapes over the sliding glass door in my den, so now I can watch an entire movie in a somewhat theater-like environment in spite of the fact that it doesn’t get dark at this time of year until after 9 p.m. So, last weekend I watched the new, live-action Snow White.

There was a lot of controversy around this film. It was hated and panned by people who were determined to hate it (and probably never ended up seeing it) even before it was released. There were people who were mad because of the casting, people mad that they were doing live-action remakes of classic animated films, and people mad that they changed things from the animated version.

It wasn’t a bad movie. It has some seriously weird stuff in it that almost ruins it, but for the most part I liked it. I’m not actually a huge fan of the animated version. I watched it a couple of years ago when my summer movie night project was watching as many of the Disney animated films as possible, and while I can recognize that it was a major achievement for its time and the animation is gorgeous, it’s not a great movie. The pacing is strange, the main plot gets very little screen time (they actually cut stuff out of a fairy tale that was already too short for a full-length movie) and there’s way too much time devoted to silly dwarf antics. The middle third of the movie is devoted to the dwarfs washing up for dinner. And that’s not even getting into how Snow White was depicted as a pre-teen but she still rides off to marry a prince and seems to have no thoughts other than to cook and clean for men and hope for a prince to rescue her. This was a story that needed rewriting.

And rewrite it they did. I’d say this one comes closer to what happened with the live-action Cinderella, where it’s not so much a remake of the animated version as it is a new telling of the same fairy tale. The main plot does keep the major beats of the story, but it puts it in a different context and adds a lot of new stuff. Unlike the live-action Cinderella, it is a musical, but most of the songs are new. They only keep a few of the songs from the original and weave some of the musical themes into the score. I like the new stuff. It makes for a more interesting movie and fixes some of the issues I’ve always had with the story.

The problem is that it isn’t new enough. The things that don’t work well are the things brought over from the animated version. One of these things is Snow White’s look. They tried to make her look like the animated version, and that just doesn’t look great on a live human. That hairstyle was a major anachronism in the animated version, something from the 1930s rather than from the vaguely Renaissance-like era some of the costumes suggest. There’s a line in the movie about how the evil queen cut Snow White’s hair on purpose so she’d be less competition, but it really doesn’t work. Even worse is the main costume that somewhat copies the outfit the animated character wears. Again, it doesn’t do well in live action. It also stands out as drastically different from the costumes worn by all the other characters. It’s not even a good version of the animated dress. It looks like the “totally not copyright-infringing the Disney version, but you can still tell it’s supposed to be Snow White” costume you’d buy at Spirit Halloween.

And then there are the dwarfs. The people who were determined to hate the movie ahead of time were sharing a picture of Snow White with a variety of roughly dressed people and claimed that these were the “woke” version of the dwarfs. They were not actually the dwarfs. They were different characters entirely. The movie would have been so much better if these characters had served the plot function of the dwarfs. No, the dwarfs are still there — and they’re live actors made to look exactly like the animated versions with the use of prosthetics and CGI. It’s so uncanny valley that it’s horrifying. There were these cartoons with human faces in the middle. I wouldn’t be surprised if there were small children who became so distressed that they had to be carried out of the theater. If I’d seen it on the big screen, I might have fled the theater. I did yelp out loud when they first appeared.

But aside from that, I liked a lot of it. Snow White is an adult instead of a child, so it’s less creepy, and she isn’t moping about, waiting for a prince to rescue her. Instead of her “I want” song being “I’m Wishing,” which is about wanting a boyfriend, she sings about wanting to set her kingdom right again to carry out the plans her parents used to have. Instead of a prince, we get a Robin Hood-like bandit who’s part of a group driven out of their homes and living in the forest, stealing food from the castle (they’re the people in the picture the haters said were woke dwarfs). Snow White coaches the dwarfs into cleaning their own house instead of doing it for them. Snow White actually gets to know the guy and they’ve fallen in love before the true love’s kiss. He’s not just kissing some dead chick he finds in the woods (after spying on her at the palace). The new music is really good, aside from one song. That song isn’t a bad song. It just doesn’t fit the situation. I even bought one of the songs. Rachel Zegler gets a lot of hate, which I don’t understand, but she has a gorgeous voice and I thought she was good in the role. I liked the guy, too.

I’m not sure I’m going to rewatch the whole movie very often because those dwarfs are unsettling and I hate her costume, but if she had a better outfit and they let the bandits play the same role as the dwarfs without trying to copy the dwarfs from the animated version, it would have been a better movie. I definitely like it better than the animated version. It’s worth a watch, but you might want to distract any easily frightened children when the dwarfs show up.

Books

Adorkable Wizard Romance

I seem to have overcome my reading slump. I’ve read several books since I started doing more pleasure reading a couple of weeks ago. Some weren’t the best, but were easy, fun reads. I did bail on a couple because I could tell I wasn’t going to enjoy them, for reasons related more to me than to the books themselves. One I really enjoyed sits right at the intersection of fantasy and romance, being both a good fantasy and a good romance. This book is Wooing the Witch Queen by Stephanie Burgis.

It’s the story of a young archduke who’s been under the control of his “advisors” since he took the throne as a child. Even as an adult, he’s essentially a prisoner and a puppet ruler with things done in his name that he would actually oppose. His only hope is to escape and throw himself on the mercy of the queen of a neighboring kingdom, a powerful witch. But there’s a bit of a mix-up when he arrives at her castle because she’s expecting a new librarian to come organize her library for her. He can do that, so he settles in. She really likes the new librarian, who’s sweet and a bit geeky, but good at what he does, and he finds that a lot of the stories about the dreaded witch queen are exaggerated, other than the extent of her power. There’s just the problem that she’s sworn to kill the archduke she believes is a threat to her kingdom, and then there are internal threats she’s battling, as well, as she tries to secure her throne after taking it back from a usurper. And his “advisors” who really run his land are gearing up for a terrible war.

This is more of an intimate fantasy than an epic fantasy, as it focuses mostly on a few characters and one location, but it digs deep into those characters. I loved the hero of this book. He’s exactly my “adorkable wizard” type. It’s so nice to read a romantic hero who’s kind, smart, and gentle, not a blustering jerk. The relationship developed not just based on physical attraction but also because these two people had common goals and values at heart, and they both had overcome trauma in their pasts.

There are fun little touches of humor, especially in the interactions with the sidekicks. It’s not quite a romantic comedy, but there are elements of that, and it’s not too dark. This really is the perfect book for a relaxing weekend when you want to escape to a magical world.

Books

The Rightful Heir

A few weeks ago, one of the things going around social media was discussion on the terrible novel you wrote when you were fourteen.

I didn’t really write a novel at fourteen. I scribbled a lot in spiral notebooks, but it was more story ideas and character development, with very little actual writing. Most of what I worked on during my teens was an epic fantasy novel a long-distance friend and I were “writing” together. Again, there was little actual writing. We made and mailed each other cassette tapes (talking into a tape recorder like we were talking to each other) brainstorming characters, situations, and scenarios, but I don’t think we actually wrote very much. I guess you could say it was kind of like a roleplaying game, but without the rules and dice. The main characters were two princesses forced to flee the palace for some reason (I’m now fuzzy on the details). She had her character and I had mine, and they split up to have separate adventures, so it ended up being basically two books that might weave in and out with each other. I came up with ideas for my character’s adventures and she came up with her character’s adventures.

The only thing I really remember about my part of the story was that my fugitive princess ended up in the woods (I guess I’ve always had a thing for forests) where she ran into a mysterious young man who took her home to where he lived with his mother, who was a kind of sorceress who lived in a cottage in the forest. Somewhere along the way we learned that he was actually the twin brother of the enemy king. The mother had been worried what her husband would do with a twin who might complicate the succession, so she had one of her advisors, a sorceress, smuggle him out of the palace and raise him in hiding. He was basically a male Briar Rose (from Sleeping Beauty), only there was still a prince at the palace. I think part of the resolution of the plot involved this princess marrying him, and it ended the war when he took his place as king (maybe they got rid of the other king and he pretended to be his brother?). I don’t know that we ever got as far as figuring out the actual ending because I didn’t learn how to plot a book until years later. I’d come up with characters, situations, and maybe an inciting incident and some scenes, but then it all fell apart.

But thinking about this long-abandoned story during the week in which we in America celebrate our break from being ruled by a king made me think about how royalist the old-school fantasy that influenced and inspired this story idea was. Fantasy authors seemed to take the concept of the divine right of kings and the belief that there was actually something different and special about royalty to extremes, making kings somehow magically ordained for their position so that having the rightful king would fix everything. That’s where we got all those farmboy who turns out to be the rightful heir stories, and it was better for a farmboy who had no experience in running a kingdom to be on the throne if he had the right bloodline than for someone without the bloodline but who was experienced in administration. The villains were often the viziers or royal advisors who seized power, then everything fell apart because they weren’t the rightful heirs, but the kingdom could be healed if the guy with the right bloodline showed up, even if he had no clue what he was doing.

Some of that might come down to the idea that anyone who actually wants power isn’t suited to have it, so the power-grabbing vizier is bad but the innocent farmboy who’d have been content herding pigs is good, but it still has to be the right farmboy who has the magical bloodline. They can’t just grab a clerk who knows how the kingdom is run but who doesn’t want to be in charge and make him king.

I suspect some of this comes from fairy tales, where there’s often something magical that sets royalty apart, like The Princess and the Pea, where only a true princess would be so delicate that she’d feel the pea under piles of mattresses. There’s also the Authurian mythology, where only the rightful king can pull the sword out of the stone. The British class system probably also plays a role. There seemed to really be a belief that the upper class was actually physically different from the lower classes. Even writers who were progressive for their time have hints of that showing up. In a couple of her books, Charlotte Bronte has her teacher heroine be surprised that the coarse peasant girls she teaches are actually capable of learning (instead of realizing that peasants were only ignorant because they were denied the kind of education the upper classes got and had to spend their days working in order to survive, so didn’t have time to sit around reading poetry and history and translating things from French and Latin).

Tolkien gets into the rightful king story with Aragorn, and how things are going to be better now that he’s shown up and the right bloodline is on the throne, and I suspect that was a huge influence on the fantasy of the 70s and 80s that influenced my teenaged self. In the very early 80s there was also the big royal wedding and Princess Di, so royalty was on the brain. Americans may have broken away from having a king but a lot of Americans are still fascinated with royalty and bloodlines, so it found its way into even American-written fantasy. Maybe there’s some fantasy to the idea that instead of having messy elections, there would be a way to know for certain that someone was the proper leader who could make everything better.

I think more recent fantasy has veered away from the idea of the rightful king who makes everything better because he’s meant to be on the throne. If there is a ruler who makes things better, it’s because he’s a good person who makes good policy (like The Goblin Emperor). Terry Pratchett had fun with the trope by having the rightful king who has all the usual signs not want to be king, and the people who could put him in power don’t want a king. He just steps up when there’s a crisis and provides leadership, then goes back to being a member of the guards. Still more recent fantasy focuses on people away from the throne. It’s ordinary people or people who have trained for a role having adventures, and the goal isn’t about putting the right king on the throne. Writers are also exploring forms of government other than monarchies in fantasy worlds.

I have to admit that there’s still something fun about the idea that the person nobody would notice is actually the person destined for greatness. That’s where a lot of the story my friend and I worked on as teenagers came from. In fact, it started as a portal fantasy in which her character was whisked away from her high school to a fantasy world where it turned out she was a princess, and only as we worked more on the story did we remove that part of it. When you’re feeling overlooked and outcast in high school, it’s fun to pretend that you’re royalty and no one knows about it.

This realization has made me think about my own fantasy worlds. The more history I read, the more it seems like European royalty was actually genetically inferior rather than superior. There was way too much inbreeding going on.

writing

On the Back Burner

I’ve been playing with my “backburner” book for the past month or so. That’s a book I’ve been working on for ages that I’m still not happy with that I take out and work on when I don’t have another project going. It was a good project for while I’m getting settled and haven’t had full brainpower, especially since I didn’t have anything else ready to work on.

But this week I finally figured out a plot for Rydding Village book 4. I knew what the internal/relationship plot would be and even knew something about who the main characters would be, but I didn’t have a plot. That came to me, and now the book is coming together in my head. I’ve figured out some plot twists and backstories. So, since I need to get another book out, I’ll be getting to work on that. I’m planning to spend next week on plotting and outlining, and then start writing after the holiday weekend.

This weekend will be devoted to getting my house in order. I need to organize the basement so I can get some of the long-term storage stuff out of my office. I finally got the room-darkening drapes hung over the sliding glass doors in my den this week. They help block the afternoon sun to keep the house cool, and they block enough light that I can watch TV in the evenings without glare when it doesn’t get fully dark until after 9 p.m. I just have one more set of curtains to put up and then some general sorting and tidying, and then my house shouldn’t look like I just moved. I haven’t yet started hanging pictures, but I have to decide what I want to put up and where. Then I’m hoping I can settle down and focus on work and I’ll be starting the quarter in a new “normal.”

As for that other book, I need to think about it. I’ve found that I always tend to put it aside at about the same point in the story, which may be a sign that there’s something wrong there. It becomes less fun then. That is when things become more intense, which is supposed to happen at that point in the book, and maybe I’m just not up for that kind of intensity right now. Or maybe the last third of the book is wrong and that’s what I need to fix. I need to ponder that, but it’s something that can be a secondary project while the new book becomes the primary project.

Incidentally, though I often use the term “backburner” about projects, it’s never been something I’ve had literal experience with. But the stove in this house actually does have a back burner. There’s a burner that only offers very low temperatures, used for either things that require gentle heat, like melting butter, or keeping things warm. I can move a pan to that burner at the back of the stove to keep it warm while I work on something else, the same way I move a project to a lower priority while I focus on something else, but I keep it “warm” by thinking about it.

Books

Dickens With Magic?

Due to a random chain of events, I ended up rewatching the Bleak House miniseries over the last couple of weeks. There was an article in the paper about a man who learned that his ancestors were involved in one of the legal cases that inspired the book. Meanwhile I was reading a Star Wars book set nearly 20 years after Return of the Jedi, in which Wedge Antilles was a major character, and it occurred to me that the actor who played Wedge had one of the leading roles in Bleak House, though I think he’s older in that than Wedge was in the book. Anyway, I was in the mood for that sort of thing and it made for good background noise while I measured and pinned up some curtains I’m hemming.

But watching that made me wonder if anyone has used the works of Dickens as an inspiration or basis for a fantasy novel. There are a number of fantasy retellings based on the works of Shakespeare, whether directly and obviously or more subtly. For instance, Rachel Caine’s Prince of Shadows is Romeo and Juliet told from the perspective of one of the secondary characters, giving background info that doesn’t appear in the play, like the fact that Romeo and Juliet were under the influence of a love spell (which would explain a lot). On the other hand, the Kingfountain series by Jeff Wheeler draws upon some Shakespeare plays, but set in a fantasy world. I don’t think he hides the inspiration, but it’s not too obvious. I remember reading one, getting midway through it and going, “Oh, he’s doing Richard III.”

But has the same thing been done with Dickens? It would seem particularly suited for epic fantasy, given that his books often cover long stretches of time and have large casts of characters. The setting is so much a part of the story that it’s practically a character, so it has tons of worldbuilding (even if the books were set in the real world, the details chosen to convey that world so that it’s vivid even to people who never saw that setting require the same sort of effort as portraying an imaginary world). The plots would translate easily into court intrigue. There are several of his books that fit the “farmboy with destiny” type trope of fantasy, with obscure young men who rise in the world and turn out to have some kind of inheritance. Fantasy might even make some of his plots make more sense, like his fondness for entirely unrelated people who look so much alike that people mistake them for each other.

I’ve learned that a fantasy retelling of A Tale of Two Cities has just come out, which uses changelings as the explanation for the two unrelated people who look the same. I’ll have to find that one. But is there a fantasy Great Expectations or Our Mutual Friend? I could have fun figuring out how to put Our Mutual Friend in a fantasy world, with the inheritance being a crown instead of the proceeds from a dust heap. Bleak House is just made for a gothic retelling with sorcery.

And now I want to rewatch the miniseries of Our Mutual Friend. I don’t think I’m going to try to delve into reading Dickens right now. I’ve managed to ease my way out of my reading slump by reading shorter, more straightforward books without a lot of subplots. Trying to read Dickens right now would probably be a lost cause. That may be my winter project.

Life

My Ideal Life

A couple of years ago, I got into a planning/time management program that’s really helped me with staying on top of things and being realistic about what I can accomplish. It starts with the big picture of your vision for your ideal life, then drills down from there to specific goals that will lead you in the direction you want to go, and then you figure out the projects you can do in the time you have available that get you to those goals. And then you break the projects down into tasks and schedule them.

It’s a quarterly process. My second quarter of this year was pretty much taken up by the move, so I didn’t even try to plan. Now I’m going through the whole process for the next quarter and revisiting the initial vision work I did, since my life has changed a lot. And I realized that I’ve pretty much got the ideal life I outlined when I started doing all this, before I moved from Texas.

Of course, I’d like to earn more money, and I need to improve the way I use my time so I’m devoting real time to both work and fun, but I’m in a position to have the kind of daily life I said I wanted.

I’ve got my little old house with a big deck and a yard full of plants and trees, so I almost feel like I’m living in a forest. I have congenial neighbors of the sort who gather on the front porch for a glass of wine in the evenings and who stop in the street to chat (our street is so quiet that you can stand in the street to chat). I live within easy walking distance of a downtown area full of restaurants and shops and venues for concerts and theater. I’m surrounded by mountains and places to go hiking and exploring. This was all stuff I dreamed of when I started imagining the life I wanted to work toward, before I was seriously considering moving.

Which means now I need to focus on getting my work life in order and actually taking advantage of my living situation to do the things I want to do. I’m trying to be more diligent about prioritizing and scheduling work, getting it done, and then moving on to do the other things I want to spend time on.

Summer is my usual time to really focus on work because it’s too hot to spend much time outdoors. It’s not as bad here as it was in Texas, but summer is still not my favorite time of year or a time when I manage to go out and do a lot. It’s a good time to sit indoors and write during the day, and then evenings are relatively comfortable (and late!) here, so that’s when I can go to things like concerts in the park or I can work in my yard.

I’ve planned my major projects for the quarter, and now I need to schedule the tasks and then actually get stuff done.

Books

Reading Slump

I’ve been in a weird reading slump since I started the moving process. I’ve only read about two novels (I’m almost done with the second) since I started packing back in early April, and that’s slow for me. I might manage to read a few pages at night before I go to sleep, but if I sit down to just read, I get distracted and restless and end up getting up to do something.

I checked a bunch of books on gardening out of the library, but I couldn’t even focus on those other than flipping through and looking at the pictures. I realized I’m nowhere near being ready for that, and what I need now isn’t a book that tells me what to plant but rather a book that tells me what to kill. I gave up and returned them all to the library.

Now that I’m finishing that second novel, I need to find something new to read. I have plenty of books on the to-be-read shelf, but if it’s languishing there, I’m probably not super interested in it. I need to make a library trip to find something that makes me want to sit down and just read.

Fortunately, I don’t seem to be in the kind of slump where I’m not interested in any books. It’s mostly been a distraction issue. But I probably need something that really captivates me and that isn’t too complicated to get over the distraction. Summer tends to be my chick lit/romcom phase, and I can usually tear through one of those pretty quickly. That might make a good thing to get for a starter book for getting back in reading mode. I have a few more curtains to hang and a piece of furniture to put together, and then there’s that crazy yard, but otherwise I’m getting to a point where I should be able to allow myself to sit and read and relax on a Sunday afternoon instead of working around the house.

I don’t think I have anything particular on the schedule for the weekend unless my next-door neighbors throw another spontaneous party like they did last weekend, other than church Sunday morning and an outing Sunday evening, so I think I’ll hit the library on Friday when I go out to run errands and then plan to spend some time during the weekend just sitting and reading and see if I can get back into the swing of things.

writing, Life

Revising and Weeding

I’ve realized that the two main things I’m focusing on right now, gardening and revising a book, are actually somewhat similar. Both involve nurturing good things to make them better and killing and getting rid of bad things.

Or, as I’ve joked, gardening is satisfying because you get the joy of nurturing the life of beautiful things and the catharsis of killing things you don’t like.

In dealing with my crazy yard, I’m digging through all the mess to find the good things hidden among the weeds and invasive plants. Removing or killing the bad plants reveals the good, pretty plants and makes them healthier. It opens up the space and makes the flowers “pop.”

Sometimes, a plant that needs to be removed isn’t necessarily bad. It’s just excessive or in the wrong place. I have raspberry plants all over the yard. They may produce fruit, which would be nice, but in the flowerbeds they’re ugly and thorny. Meanwhile, all the trees in the yard have been allowed to seed offspring. I love redbuds and maples, but I don’t want that many of them, and I don’t want them in places where they’d cast shade on all the flowers. There are plenty of trees on this lot, enough to make me feel like I live in the woods. I can do “forest bathing” in my backyard. I’ve joked that I’m one of the missing Entwives from The Lord of the Rings, I love trees so much. The trees were one of the reasons I wanted this house. But I need to kill some of them and remove them so all the other plants can thrive and so that the trees themselves can be healthy.

Revising a book works the same way. You have to get rid of the stuff that doesn’t belong so that the good parts can shine. There are parts that keep the good bits from standing out or making sense. Sometimes meaning can be distorted or clouded by not using exactly the right word or by using too many words.

And there may be stuff that’s good — fun details, vivid writing, beautiful prose — that doesn’t belong. It’s good on its own, but it’s in the wrong place, where it slows down the pacing or changes the tone of the scene. It needs to be moved to a better place or even eliminated.

I’m not sure whether it’s good for me to be doing similar kinds of work in the two main areas I’m working on right now because it keeps me in the same mindset or if I need to maybe mix it up and not be having to make the same kinds of decisions all day. But this is the work that needs to be done now, so maybe I should just add some other kind of work that’s different.

Life, My Books

The Abandoned Garden

I may have vastly underestimated what a garden that had been abandoned for years would be like when I wrote Tea and Empathy. I’m facing the same thing, and it’s absolutely crazy.

From what I understand, the person who used to live in this house had done a lot of work on the yard, planting a lot of trees and flowers. Then he had some kind of mental health issues and stopped maintaining the house and yard, becoming a hoarder, so the house and yard were full of junk. Then he abandoned the house entirely. A few years later, the people I bought it from bought it, cleared out the junk and restored and remodeled the house. They took down some trees that were too close to the house and must have cut down everything in the lawn because it was just about bare when I looked at the place, with only a few daffodils coming up around the shrubs and trees that were left.

A winter-bare back yard, up a steeply sloping hill. There is some grass barely growing, and a lot of bare trees.
The yard the day I looked at the house and decided to buy it.

I first saw the house in late March, then started moving in early April. And then the lawn exploded. So much stuff sprang up. A lot of it was weeds, but a lot of it was good plants, and the trick has been telling the difference. I figure that any of the good stuff that’s survived on its own all this time is a good plant to keep around because it means I won’t have to baby it. I’ve tried using the identification feature on my phone, with mixed results. There are some things I know it’s right about, some things I know it’s wrong about, and different photos of the same plant will be identified as different things. Then there are things I thought it was wrong about that it turns out to be right about.

There are masses of daylilies all over the front, side, and back yard, in huge clumps. I understand they need to be divided and spread out more at the end of the growing season. These have been on their own for a long time and seem to be doing okay, so I don’t know if I’ll bother doing anything to them.

A yard that's a sea of green, full of trees and plants. There are a few pops of color, like clumps of orange daylilies.
The yard this morning. It’s a bit overwhelming.

There are hostas everywhere, a number of varieties, up under trees and in flowerbeds. There’s a big lilac bush, a couple of dogwood trees of a variety that keeps blooms for a long time, and a huge redbud tree. There’s a mass of spirea that the bees and butterflies are loving. There’s a bunch of plants that may be milkweed. Whatever it is, the bees and butterflies are all over it. I’m generally keeping anything the bees and butterflies like.

One thing the phone may have been right about, after all, is this ugly, thorny thing I was sure was a weed but that the phone said was raspberry plants. I found some back against the fence that may not have been cut down that are producing berries. I met someone who knew the man who used to live here, and she said he did grow raspberries. But they’ve spread. They’re all over both the front and back yards. I’d pondered leaving them alone until the fall and then transplanting them to a better place, but there’s a whole thicket farther up the hill, and that should be enough raspberries. I don’t want them all over the yard because they’re thorny and ugly. And, to be honest, I’m not a huge fan of raspberries. They have gritty little seeds and not a lot of flavor (though that may be because I’ve only had supermarket raspberries. I don’t know what these will be like). I doubt I’ll get enough for jam, but we’ll see.

There are some plants that I know are invasive. They’re the first things local gardeners warn me about. One is a plant called garlic mustard, and it’s all over the yard. Pulling it up is a massive undertaking. I got the plants from last year that were going to seed, and now I have to get this year’s plants before they can go to seed. The trick is that they look similar to other plants that are growing in the yard, so I have to be careful what I pull, and there’s so much of it that it leaves the ground bare when I dig them all up. I’m throwing wildflower seeds into the bare spots.

Then there’s something called tree of heaven, which is apparently very invasive, very aggressive, and even spreads a substance that’s toxic to other plants, plus it’s the host plant for the spotted lanternfly, another invasive species that’s a threat to the local grape growers at the wineries. There must have been a big one growing here that got cut down because another was trying to grow from the stump. I normally try to avoid much use of chemicals in gardening, but this is one where you cut it down and then poison the heck out of it. I’ve been cutting these down and pulling up seedlings when I find them.

I’ve got a lot of something that’s either catalpa or an invasive called princess tree. Either way, they’re very fast-growing because there was nothing there in late March and now they’re taller than I am. I’m killing the ones close to the house because I don’t want trees right against the house.

The previous owner didn’t leave any herbs that I’ve found. The raspberries seem to be the only edible plants (well, supposedly you can cook and eat the garlic mustard, but I’m not going to try, and there are some wild strawberries, but apparently they’re not edible). So that’s different from Elwyn’s garden.

Unfortunately for me, the garden isn’t at all related to my work and earns me no money, unlike Elwyn, so I’m fitting in that work around my writing work. I’m spending about an hour a day pulling weeds and cutting things back. Right now, I’m just trying to keep it from being an eyesore. I may have to wait until next spring to actually plan what I want to do with the lot. I’m hoping to keep it mostly natural with ground cover and flowers instead of grass. And preferably fewer weeds.

writing

Resting the Book

In addition to finding that I’d written my new next-door neighbor, name and all, into the book I’m revising more than two years before I met her, this review of the book has taught me a lot of things. One of them is that the advice to let a draft rest before you go back to work on it is really sound. You discover so many things when the book isn’t fresh in your mind, when you don’t remember why you wrote something a certain way.

One thing I’ve discovered because of this is the way that story elements can linger, even after you’ve removed them. In my earliest draft of this book, I’d given my hero a flaw, a fear that he’d have to overcome in order to prevail and achieve his goals. I ended up cutting this fear in later drafts because I never could come up with a way to make it relevant in the climax of the book. There were other things the hero learned, but this fear wasn’t an issue for him. I tried to keep this fear as just a character trait, a quirk like Indiana Jones and his fear of snakes — it doesn’t really affect the plot, and there’s never something he doesn’t manage to do because of snakes, but the fear raises the stakes because we know just how much he’s struggling. And then I realized I was devoting way too much time to something that ended up being less and less relevant as I worked through the story (he didn’t have to face his fear to get to the thing he wanted, unlike Indy finding that the Ark was surrounded by snakes).

But traces of it remained even when I cut the direct references. I’d structured the opening scene in a way that would ramp up the tension because of this fear, and that structure remained. Without the fear, I realized there was no point to this structure. It was only when I let the book rest for a while that this became obvious to me. When I didn’t remember why I did it that way, I was able to look at the structure objectively and wonder why I had that extra step in the scene that didn’t need to be there.

There are a few other parts in the book where the hero is reluctant to do the thing he used to fear. I’d deleted the reference to the fear, but I’d left in the reluctance and the internal conflict about it.

It was only through thinking about all this that I finally realized why I was never able to make the fear work in the climax of the story: He overcomes this fear in the opening scene. This is a fear he has to face down all the time, and he does the thing even though it’s unpleasant (again, like Indy and the snakes). There’s no suspense at the end whether he’ll be able to do that thing in the climax of the story. We know he can do it, even if he hates it. But there would have been no story at all if he hadn’t been able to overcome the fear in the opening scene. He wouldn’t even have been in the opening scene if he hadn’t overcome that fear previously.

I think it would have been a fun character quirk, but there were a lot of other things that were more important to incorporate into the story and it was already way too long, so I didn’t have room to weave in something that ended up not mattering, and there’s not even a critical moment where that fear raises the stakes for something the hero has to do, where his goal and his fear are in conflict and we know he’ll go for the goal, but it’s going to be unpleasant (like the snakes around the Ark).

The other thing letting something rest is good for is spotting jokes that don’t work. I’ll come across a line that makes no sense, and only after reading it a few times do I remember that I put that in as a joke. If I don’t get my own joke, it has to go.